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I'm kim chanme. who is attending at yangsan highschool
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I'm year 2 of this school and I have opportunity to introduce my self in English.
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My family is inclued with my dad,mom brother, and me. so four of us.
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My dad have working in logistic industry.
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My mom is housewife and often do sports

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My elder brother leave the university for temporary and working in the company
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My dad like to meet up with his friends and my mom like to do sports
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My elder brother like to do computer game and reading book
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I often go to the School library and reading book
Àúµµ ¿äÁò Çб³ µµ¼­°üÀ» ¿À°¡¸ç µ¶¼­¸¦ ÇϰïÇÕ´Ï´Ù.
It really gave some tings about wisdom and making me more thinking.
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I guess reading book is kind of good hobby.

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I'm not quite sure about this homework this time.
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It give me some kind of pressure to me. because I haven't got the confidence with English

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Read, and Read. and understand and understand about sentence.
I believe that My english will be improve soon.

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I hope my English grammar sturcture will be improve more.

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understand writing will be improve by that make me feel good about this homework.

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